This is week two of the Sketching on Location class through Joggles. Jane LaFazio is our instructor and she is fantastic! Rather than being overly critical about my piece, I decided to critique the experience and piece listing what I liked or didn't like about it.
I went to our local Panera Bread store and it was really dark for me. I chose a place with as much light as possible, but that cast funny shadows on the subject that I wasn't use to. Also I was under a time limit because I was due to meet friends for dinner in about an hour and half or so. That's plenty of time for most, but for me, no, not enough time. Or at the time I felt a tad rushed. On the other hand, having a time limit did force me to get something down on paper as quickly as possible. I tend to delay and busy myself with prep work in an effort to not face the daunting task at hand. Maybe when I gain confidence in myself I'll jump in faster.
Also I was a bit distracted by three teenage girls at a nearby table. My, is it really that bad socially in high school, who said what to him, what he thought, what she said, etc... oh wait I know many adult conversations that sound very similar!
Ok so back to the sketch. I think my subject matter was a bit difficult. Maybe I bit off more than I can chew (pun intended!) I chose a Cinnamon Raisin Bread Apple muffin thing. Very irregularly shaped. It smelled really good, but was a bit disappointing in the taste department. Too dry and dull. But anyway. I liked the way the label on the cup of Hot Chocolate came out. I am very nervous about doing logos and/or print on art, but I surprised myself. I left it as my location label for that sketch. Then I liked the cup and lid as well.
I did not like the muffin itself. Our instructor strongly urges us to sketch and paint from real objects rather than pictures. After I looked at the picture that I took, I realize that I should have sketched the overall shape of the muffin itself as a whole rather than tackling each bump and crevice of the muffin. Also I had a hard time with the shadows of those bumps and such. Again, I should have squinted and tried to get an overall sketch. Also I didn't like the way the right side of the plate turned out. The left side was pretty good, but it was about the time I was working on that when the time suddenly ran out. (I had set an alarm on my phone, but when it went off, I did't recognize the sound. I got a call from my husband trying to find me.) Anyway, I didn't get a chance to sketch the rightside as carefully at the left. That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it!
I was disappointed with the icing. I tried to leave the paper white in those areas, but it was too flat and just didn't work. Then I tried to color it a bit and the adjacent colors bled into the areas. Oh well.... Well I guess that's enough analysis for now.
The original muffin and hot chocolate.

My rendering. (Note: This is ink and watercolor on 5x7 white hot press watercolor paper)

Ok, so I just keep telling myself, it's just a sketch, don't stress!